"By time a calf is born" -> "By the time a calf is born"

And boy, could that page be expanded into a whole site by itself. What am I talking about, it probably already has.



And on the milk page:

"the mammary glands for which they are named" As opposed to those other mammary glands for which they are not named? Needs a comma after "glands".

"the ability retain" -> "the ability to retain"

"the preferred milk for feeding human infants" Preferred by whom? As you said in the intro that's changing, but it's not universal. "Little Johnny needs his DHA fortified formula!"

"Milk is a very complex substance, composed of water, proteins (3.3%), particularly caseins, carbohydrates (4.9%), particularly Lactose, Fats (3.4%), over 400 fatty acids, a wide selection of vitamins, both water and fat soluble and minerals, and a selection of enzymes (percentages are for cow milk)."
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"Milk is a very complex substance, composed of: water; proteins (3.3%), particularly caseins; carbohydrates (4.9%), particularly Lactose; Fats (3.4%); over 400 fatty acids; a wide selection of vitamins -- both water and fat soluble -- and minerals; and a selection of enzymes (percentages are for cow milk)."

Your "Greek Yogurt" description compares it to Labne, but it appears before Labne.

Cream - I don't know about what you have available, but virtually every brand of "heavy whipping cream" I can find has carrageenan, mono & diglycerides and polysorbate 80.

Crème Fraiche "it is also used" capital I.

"Again, milk is not a natural food for adult humans, it has been adapted to, imperfectly, by some cultures." Semi-colon, or maybe two sentences.

Haven't ready the cheese page yet.