I'd suggest the following edits. The first couple can be debated.
3. Add a comma after "ribs".
4. Add a comma after "diameter". Change the comma after "in" to a semicolon and add a comma after "sausage".
6. s /course/coarse/
Also, the HTML page title (or name or whatever the proper term) shows up as "Pork & Sausage". I assume it's the usual issue of & and & being rendered differently.
HTH a bit!
Cheers,
Scott.