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Post #389,218 by Silverlock 5/6/14 6:13:06 AM Reply	While not a professional editor I did quite a bit of tutoring in college and you seem not to have fallen into any of the more obvious writing traps. I would like to see more. Especially in regards to how you handle dialogue and internal monologues. Also, from the snippet provided, this seems like an intriguing story and I would like to read more just to satisfy my own curiosity as to what the story is about. I think the single most compelling piece of evidence for global warming is that Fox News viewers think it's a hoax.
Post #389,231 by rcareaga 5/6/14 5:19:16 PM Reply	a shortish (>2500 words) additional passage I'm rather pleased with, and which sneaks in a lot of the backstory in the form of a commencement address, can be found here: https://dl.dropboxus...79/the_speech.pdf (Its five pages display in a two-page spread format I don't have time to defeat, so must be read left-right-down; rinse and repeat) cordially,
Post #389,232 by boxley 5/6/14 5:41:23 PM Reply	holds together well Any opinions expressed by me are mine alone, posted from my home computer, on my own time as a free American and do not reflect the opinions of any person or company that I have had professional relations with in the past 58 years. meep
Post #389,233 by Another Scott 5/6/14 8:54:15 PM Reply	Well done. Thanks for sharing.

genre fiction - (rcareaga) - (11) - May 5, 2014, 01:36:08 AM EDT

Are you part of any writing communities? - (static) - May 5, 2014, 03:09:30 AM EDT

beats some of the crap I havve been reading lately - (boxley) - May 5, 2014, 11:16:10 AM EDT

Promises intrigue, of the sort which (one always hopes..) - (Ashton) - May 5, 2014, 04:46:43 PM EDT

Happy to read more and comment - (malraux) - (1) - May 5, 2014, 05:41:15 PM EDT

Re: Happy to read more and comment - (rcareaga) - May 5, 2014, 06:40:07 PM EDT

While not a professional editor - (Silverlock) - (3) - May 6, 2014, 06:13:06 AM EDT

a shortish (>2500 words) additional passage - (rcareaga) - (2) - May 6, 2014, 05:19:16 PM EDT

holds together well -NT - (boxley) - May 6, 2014, 05:41:23 PM EDT

Well done. Thanks for sharing. -NT - (Another Scott) - May 6, 2014, 08:54:15 PM EDT

Re: genre fiction - (rcareaga) - May 8, 2014, 02:08:41 PM EDT

time's up - (rcareaga) - May 10, 2014, 10:01:03 PM EDT

It is a silly place.
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