genre fiction - (rcareaga) - (11) - May 5, 2014, 01:36:08 AM EDT
         Are you part of any writing communities? - (static) - May 5, 2014, 03:09:30 AM EDT
         beats some of the crap I havve been reading lately - (boxley) - May 5, 2014, 11:16:10 AM EDT
         Promises intrigue, of the sort which (one always hopes..) - (Ashton) - May 5, 2014, 04:46:43 PM EDT
         Happy to read more and comment - (malraux) - (1) - May 5, 2014, 05:41:15 PM EDT
             Re: Happy to read more and comment - (rcareaga) - May 5, 2014, 06:40:07 PM EDT
         While not a professional editor - (Silverlock) - (3) - May 6, 2014, 06:13:06 AM EDT
             a shortish (>2500 words) additional passage - (rcareaga) - (2) - May 6, 2014, 05:19:16 PM EDT
                 holds together well -NT - (boxley) - May 6, 2014, 05:41:23 PM EDT
                 Well done. Thanks for sharing. -NT - (Another Scott) - May 6, 2014, 08:54:15 PM EDT
         Re: genre fiction - (rcareaga) - May 8, 2014, 02:08:41 PM EDT
         time's up - (rcareaga) - May 10, 2014, 10:01:03 PM EDT