Re: Harsh (and possibly useless?) criticism:

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Post #277,261 by pwhysall 1/3/07 7:00:21 AM 1/3/07 7:01:00 AM Reply	Re: Harsh (and possibly useless?) criticism: 1. True, but when in Rome and all that. 2. Yep, good point. Stylistic cleanup needed. I wrote all that last night when I was a bit tired, and it shows. What's the point of being humble? If you don't think you're great, who else will? This is my trumpet-blowing document. Of course, it's important not to over-egg the pudding. Nits: 1. It was in the UK first. Those Ohioians just stole it. Thiefses! 2. Good catch. 3. HA TMS (Highways Agency Traffic Management System) should have the space. Thanks. 4. No, the "of" gets a small "o". Check the [link\|http://www.tees.ac.uk/\|web site]. In general, the linking words in titles like that don't get capitalised. Peter [link\|http://www.no2id.net/\|Don't Let The Terrorists Win] [link\|http://www.kuro5hin.org\|There is no K5 Cabal] [link\|http://guildenstern.dyndns.org\|Home] Use P2P for legitimate purposes! [link\|http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?pwhysall\|A better terminal emulator] [image\|http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/pwhysall/Misc/saveus.png\|0\|Darwinia\|\|] Edited by pwhysall Jan. 3, 2007, 07:01:00 AM EST Expand All History
Post #277,279 by bepatient 1/3/07 11:20:49 AM Reply	I is useless in a CV they already know it was YOU that did these things. Start every statement with an action. such as Ran nightly backups Responded to Customer Service Inquiries Installed Project X across 3000 user base Modified Process Y saving the company 10 million carbunkles per year. Everything I saw on the UK job boards supported the use of bullets as opposed to the freeform you are using. Too much of today's music is fashionable crap dressed as artistry._{Adrian Belew}
Post #277,283 by pwhysall 1/3/07 11:51:41 AM Reply	Good point I'll try that and see what it smells like. Peter [link\|http://www.no2id.net/\|Don't Let The Terrorists Win] [link\|http://www.kuro5hin.org\|There is no K5 Cabal] [link\|http://guildenstern.dyndns.org\|Home] Use P2P for legitimate purposes! [link\|http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?pwhysall\|A better terminal emulator] [image\|http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h262/pwhysall/Misc/saveus.png\|0\|Darwinia\|\|]
Post #277,354 by drewk 1/3/07 11:15:57 PM Reply	Nit I believe you meant to say "I am useless." === Kip Hawley is still an idiot. === Purveyor of Doc Hope's [link\|http://DocHope.com\|fresh-baked dog biscuits and pet treats]. [link\|http://DocHope.com\|http://DocHope.com]
Post #277,366 by bepatient 1/4/07 1:20:44 AM Reply	No. I didn't. Too much of today's music is fashionable crap dressed as artistry._{Adrian Belew}

CV Critique please - (pwhysall) - (11) - Jan. 3, 2007, 02:41:12 AM EST

First, a slight digression: (new thread) - (CRConrad) - Jan. 3, 2007, 03:04:41 AM EST

Harsh (and possibly useless?) criticism: - (CRConrad) - (5) - Jan. 3, 2007, 04:41:12 AM EST

Re: Harsh (and possibly useless?) criticism: - (pwhysall) - (4) - Jan. 3, 2007, 07:01:00 AM EST

I is useless in a CV - (bepatient) - (3) - Jan. 3, 2007, 11:20:49 AM EST

Good point - (pwhysall) - Jan. 3, 2007, 11:51:41 AM EST

Nit - (drewk) - (1) - Jan. 3, 2007, 11:15:57 PM EST

No. I didn't. -NT - (bepatient) - Jan. 4, 2007, 01:20:44 AM EST

suggestion - (boxley) - (1) - Jan. 3, 2007, 10:27:42 AM EST

Good point, ta. -NT - (pwhysall) - Jan. 3, 2007, 10:29:14 AM EST

Red pen - (drewk) - (1) - Jan. 3, 2007, 09:36:01 PM EST

Re: Red pen - (pwhysall) - Jan. 4, 2007, 01:42:36 AM EST

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