Better
Both of you helped clear up the confusion! Thanks! I wasn't good in grammar because they jumped me over basic grammar to honors English. I was so mad, because I wanted to be a writer, so I've had to more or less learn it on my own, plus a college course or two I took.
Nightowl >8#
Edit: Corrected sentence
"Don't be a cynic and disconsolate preacher. Don't bewail and moan. Omit the negative propositions. Challenge us with incessant affirmatives. Don't waste yourself in rejection, or bark against the bad, but chant the beauty of the good." Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Nightowl
March 16, 2004, 02:25:41 PM EST