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New so haiku is not poetry?
Songs of solomon and david not poetic? Think we have the word rhymes and poems mixed up. In rhymes the cadence must match preceding lines in a pattern, In poetry the cadence must match the cadence.
thanx,
bill
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Since corporations are the equivelent of human but they have no "concience" they are by definition sociopaths
New Haiku has very, very strict rhythm
If it's one sillable off, it's not haiku. I don't know about rhymes, they don't survibe translation well.

DOn't know about David and Solomon. I am trying to learn Hebrew alphaet at the moment (not for reasons of poetry :) ), will report when I can read (sound) them in the original.
--

It made Ketchup!
Sweet Ketchup!
Put it on a hot dog, put it on a burger,
Put it on your sister and she'll holler blody murder!
Sweet Ketchup.

--Tom Paxton.
Expand Edited by Arkadiy April 9, 2003, 10:54:26 PM EDT
New sheesh only a Russian :-)
I am not planning on living in Israel anytime soon so am putting off learning hebrew. Can pick it out of a crowd enough to embarrass myself for asking Palestinians if they are Israelis :-) Most of the sounds are hork a lugey(an expression by certain comedians) and mor constanents than vowels. As a Russian who has learned english at your level, hebrew should be a snap.
thanx,
bill
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Since corporations are the equivelent of human but they have no "concience" they are by definition sociopaths
New Being a Rusian jew might be some help :<)
--

It made Ketchup!
Sweet Ketchup!
Put it on a hot dog, put it on a burger,
Put it on your sister and she'll holler blody murder!
Sweet Ketchup.

--Tom Paxton.
New haiku
the explanation (of which i am probably way off on is seventeen related words in 5 lines no more no less)

I observe the sky
it matches the blue
of my drink
entrancing me
I snore loadly farting


thank you very much
bill
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Since corporations are the equivelent of human but they have no "concience" they are by definition sociopaths
New Haiku is 5-7-5. That's something else. ;)
When fresh snow does fall
A girlfriend with a smile
cannot be trusted

Damnit, now I gotta go find the original.

Then there's Basho:

Writing crap about
Freshly falling snow does not
make good poetry
After 9/11, Bush made two statements:
1. "Terrorists hate America because America is a land of freedom and opportunity."
2. "We intend to attack the root causes of terrorism."

Sounds like everything is going according to plan.
New thats 5 5 3?
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Since corporations are the equivelent of human but they have no "concience" they are by definition sociopaths
New Re: thats 5 5 3?
Frail and lonely moth
Seeking warmth of candle's flame
Goddamn idiot.

--Saul Steinberg, ca. 1963
"Die Welt ist alles, was der Fall ist."
New LMAO!
Good one.

Box, 5-7-5 refers to the number of syllables, not words.
After 9/11, Bush made two statements:
1. "Terrorists hate America because America is a land of freedom and opportunity."
2. "We intend to attack the root causes of terrorism."

Sounds like everything is going according to plan.
New okay 5,7,5
the wind is blowing
tree tops whipping swirling sky
wilding rain crying

better?
thanx,
bill
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Since corporations are the equivelent of human but they have no "concience" they are by definition sociopaths
New Yup.
After 9/11, Bush made two statements:
1. "Terrorists hate America because America is a land of freedom and opportunity."
2. "We intend to attack the root causes of terrorism."

Sounds like everything is going according to plan.
New Windows haiku.
Chaos reigns within.
Reflect, repent, and reboot.
Order shall return.
Windows NT crashed.
I am the Blue Screen of Death.
No one hears your screams.
Alex

Men never do evil so completely and cheerfully as when they do it from religious conviction. -- Blaise Pascal (1623-1662)
New didnt Ben have a haiku generator?
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Since corporations are the equivelent of human but they have no "concience" they are by definition sociopaths
     The Poetry of Donald Rumsfeld - (cwbrenn) - (29)
         ROFL -NT - (deSitter)
         The apotheosis of English poetry - (Arkadiy) - (27)
             Don't know if this is snobbery or sarcasm - (deSitter) - (26)
                 Rhyme - nonexisting - (Arkadiy) - (25)
                     Re: Rhyme - nonexisting - (rcareaga) - (7)
                         "Transcends cathegories" - (Arkadiy) - (6)
                             Brodsky, Blake - (rcareaga)
                             Thanks - pronunciation hints. Yevtushenko story - (Ashton) - (4)
                                 Yevtushenko - outstanding -NT - (deSitter)
                                 Yevtushenko -- old? - (rcareaga) - (1)
                                     Re: Yevtushenko -- old? - (Ashton)
                                 Don't know _who_ would be interested - (Arkadiy)
                     so haiku is not poetry? - (boxley) - (12)
                         Haiku has very, very strict rhythm - (Arkadiy) - (11)
                             sheesh only a Russian :-) - (boxley) - (1)
                                 Being a Rusian jew might be some help :<) -NT - (Arkadiy)
                             haiku - (boxley) - (8)
                                 Haiku is 5-7-5. That's something else. ;) - (inthane-chan) - (7)
                                     thats 5 5 3? -NT - (boxley) - (6)
                                         Re: thats 5 5 3? - (rcareaga) - (3)
                                             LMAO! - (inthane-chan) - (2)
                                                 okay 5,7,5 - (boxley) - (1)
                                                     Yup. -NT - (inthane-chan)
                                         Windows haiku. - (a6l6e6x) - (1)
                                             didnt Ben have a haiku generator? -NT - (boxley)
                     Funny you should mention Pushkin. - (a6l6e6x) - (3)
                         Hmmm - Moz 1.2.1 renders the Cyrillic fine - (Ashton)
                         Very good translation! - (Arkadiy) - (1)
                             I found it on a Russian site. - (a6l6e6x)

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