Couple more
When you say the Western Luke was the most "deliberately" revised, does that mean with careful deliberation, or with most deliberate intent to revise meaning?
"... that he is the Son of God. In John he preaches it ..." Period should be comma.
There are several places throughout the appendix where it reads like you're quoting but there are no quote marks.
Under food and shelter - and this complaint isn't with what you wrote but the teaching itself - the way that God provides for the birds of the heavens is that the birds spend all day hunting for food and building their nests. So if I'm going to rely on God to provide the same way, I'll be working my ass off.
"... that he is the Son of God. In John he preaches it ..." Period should be comma.
There are several places throughout the appendix where it reads like you're quoting but there are no quote marks.
Under food and shelter - and this complaint isn't with what you wrote but the teaching itself - the way that God provides for the birds of the heavens is that the birds spend all day hunting for food and building their nests. So if I'm going to rely on God to provide the same way, I'll be working my ass off.
