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New Karsten posted it there
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I already made a minor edit in the last paragraph and added some comments at the end.
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Microsoft offers them the one thing most business people will pay any price for - the ability to say "we had no choice - everyone's doing it that way." -- [link|http://z.iwethey.org/forums/render/content/show?contentid=38978|Andrew Grygus]
New Couple of nits to pick
do not wish to contribute to the furtherence of an ongoing illegal enterprise

Illegal enterprise? Last time I checked, having an enterprise isn't illegal. Leveraging your monopoly is.

How about:

do not wish to contribute to the furtherence of illegal practices by an abusive monopoly

Same thing goes for:

become dependent upon an illegal monopoly

Monopolies aren't illegal. Leveraging said monopoly is.

Change to:

become dependent upon an abusive monopoly
New Picking right back
Illegal enterprise? Last time I checked, having an enterprise isn't illegal. Leveraging your monopoly is.

And that's the enterprise I'm talking about. ;)

Monopolies aren't illegal. Leveraging said monopoly is.

And since this one is proven in court to be maintained by abusive leveraging, this monopoly is illegal.

Although your wordings would probably be better in a court, and work just as well for this.
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Microsoft offers them the one thing most business people will pay any price for - the ability to say "we had no choice - everyone's doing it that way." -- [link|http://z.iwethey.org/forums/render/content/show?contentid=38978|Andrew Grygus]
     First Draft. Comments Encouraged. - (mmoffitt) - (11)
         Well . . . - (Andrew Grygus) - (2)
             Re: Well . . . - (jb4) - (1)
                 Points well taken. - (mmoffitt)
         Make sure they use M$ - (Steve Lowe)
         Re: First Draft. Comments Encouraged. - (pwhysall) - (3)
             Karsten posted it there - (drewk) - (2)
                 Couple of nits to pick - (n3jja) - (1)
                     Picking right back - (drewk)
         Comments. - (Ashton)
         a couple of suggestions - (boxley) - (1)
             Xcellent. - (mmoffitt)

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